Two short animation loops I made using aseprite

I exported them at 1000%, as they are 16x. I am curious to know what people think about the flowers in particular, I think that the second version is too jittery and complicated, and prefer the simpler one.

“Jack”

Flower 1:

Flower 2:
same url as above, but “3” instead of 2. I’m limited to two links :innocent:

I would love to know what people think, thanks!

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My suggestion is that you use the preview window and zoom out to try to see what looks natural on speed and looks. From my eye I think the flower’s wind looks a bit to fast when moving to the left and should probably be held for a bit if its really that strong. I would also block out the flower with plain colors first then just make a pallete gradient from bottom or left (Darkest) to the right or top (Brightest) Really creative animations though!

These are great! Jack really has a lot of personality.

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Thanks for the feedback! I should use the preview more, and I was trying to capture multiple parts of the long leaf tulips have with the different values. Probably a bit ambitious for 16x. I will try blocking out the next ones, I want to make a few variants, they are to help show the wind in a larger animation.

Cool, good luck!