Animation Gif - The Healing of Luce - Open to criticism!

Animation FFFinal-DN

I made this art in honor of the Vatican’s new mascot. Criticism is welcome.

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it looks good! there could be more movement. for example, when she starts the heal magic, her hair and hood could move a little to show more force

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Great idea! It would really be much better this way. Thanks!

Lol watched it like 1000 times. Really mesmerizing. Looks really good. I like the shading and every pixel is right on their spot. Aside of movement, the second “eye blink” comes up pretty quickly and is quite slow. You could tweak the pacing by setting custom values for the frames. Even small changes make huge mistake.

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I’m very happy with your compliment! I’m still learning about frame adjustments. But it really makes a difference when used well,

It depends where your picture is going or where is it “coming from”.

If you are emulating a certain style or era you can perfectly leave the frames as they are. Also some systems didn’t have a frame timer implemented so you needed to pace the animation with multiple frames.

You could try to remove couple of frames to make it simpler and “snappier” or take it to other direction by increasing the animation speed and duplicating some of the frames. The choice is fully artistic. Your art however could utilize some movement as there are pixels to work with. Small head movement for example.

This said it’s all unnecessary as your art is great as it is but it might produce more stylized and finalized result. Especially if you are presenting it in a bigger size factor as here.

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Thank you, your feedback will help me with my future arts.