Any ideas on how to improve my art?

Made this yesterday, first few attempts.
What you all think? Any ideas on how to improve it?
Im trying to maintain a level of detail, without over doing it.

I’d first increase the contrast, do the following trick to see a basic contrast:
close your eyes as much as possible as still viewing something, if you do that you’ll only see three colours, skin, hair and white. Increase the difference within each colour ramp up to the point in which you can differentiate the outline and detail colours more clearly, but don’t overdo it nonetheless.

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