Art Critique - Sky Island: Fall

Could I have critique on this piece?
sky.island.fal.dithering2

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This is a pretty mellow piece. I love the duo-tone you’ve got going on here, the oranges stand out more. The cloud base there seems a bit over-exposed compared to everything else, is it meant to be emitting its own glow?

The only thing I think could use a touch-up is the pumpkin on the bottom-right there; its roundness and lack of texture make it look more like a tangerine.

Have you considered making a short, animated loop of this? It would make for a nice banner.

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Animated loop?

Of what, just the island going up and down?

Sure, maybe even the background sky scrolling by, but it’s your decision entirely. Your piece just invokes in me a sense that it would be animated; not entirely sure why, but it does.

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Same. It would be very serene if animated. As if you’re floating just outside that tower(?) and watching it as it drifts through the sky

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