My first artwork on Aseprite, looking for feedback and ways to improve!


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The second one is supposed to be the robot head from the band Caravan Palace, just in case anyone its curious.

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mm donuts :crazy_face: I think one thing I would suggest is to up the contrast a little bit in certain areas of each picture. Like adding a couple more brighter highlights on the donut, especially for the icing to make it a little less flat and more dynamic, or adding an extra/darker shadow or two to the right side of the robot head. Either way these are awesome and great job for your first go!

Thanks for the feedback!