Point me to my problems in this


This is not the right topic. The guides section is used to create guides and other tutorials.

not the right topic, but its pretty good, the shading is somewhat muddy in some places(legs and hair) you have to remember that the gun fire does emit light for even a second, and its odd that the shoes and gloves odnt have shading compared to the rest, its pretty good overall but i would be a bit more methodical when it comes to consistency in shading