The window is SICK. Also love the colouring. I’m a total novice at this, but the inside of the room seems to be missing depth to me; a lot of things are dead-on, making it look quite squarish. Things like the monitor, desk, drawer unit under the window, I think they would benefit with a bit of perspective. Vertical contours on the curtain too!
damn I really liked it. I cant believe it’s one of your first pieces… maybe you can make the shoes a little bit darker and add a light that comes from the computer and the window.