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And which one wouldn’t you choose? Criticism is welcome!
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I think the second one
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I appreciate the effort put into these options, and I was hoping the first one would be the best choice because it has a great atmosphere. However, it might have benefited from incorporating more areas for the eyes to rest, such as low-contrast areas like stars that aren’t overshadowed by clouds or sticker-type
designs. A wider canvas could also have helped accommodate all the different elements better.
As for the third option, while I see some creativity in the hair, it seems to resemble a cloud throw pillow a bit too much for my liking, lacking the distinct structure I prefer. Additionally, the background feels quite minimal leaving way too much foreground. Considering these points, I believe the second option stands out as the most visually accessible, making the character easier to interpret.
What are your thoughts on this?
Thank you very much for the feedback! Your tips are really coherent. And I agree with everything you said, especially about the first image, there really isn’t enough space to rest your eyes.
About the third one, it was intentional on my part to make a cloud pillow, because my OC has the ability to manipulate her cloud hair to transform into various objects and make it touchable.
I will apply more things about the second art. Thank you very much, this helps me a lot!
I love all three options, but the third one wins for me. Happy new year, by the way! ^^
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Thanks a bunch! I’m glad you liked it!